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Writing style: “elegantly uncomplicated”

REVIEWS FOR EVA:

 
In a beautiful review for “Eva” the reviewer stated that my writing was “elegantly uncomplicated.” I was thrilled. That is a high compliment, in my view.
 
I took an oath, to myself, after college creative writing classes. I vowed: Simple. Just say it. Go for Hemingway-esque with passion and suspense. Don’t use two words when one will do. Get out of yourself, Diane and just tell the story.
 
Years later, when I edited the thesis for my homeopathic degree, I realized I had been showing off my Writing, with a big ole’ capital W… So I edited to rub off its intellectual rough edges. To make it easily comprehensible.


DON’T BE CAUGHT WRITING!

And with fiction, I don’t want anyone yanked out of the story because they’ve noticed my writing. I want them lost in it, for them to forget they are reading a book. To me, that is the ultimate goal. I don’t read ( and certainly don’t write) literary fiction. It is too often self-involved. Self aware. It feels as if the author was sunk into her writing experience, forgetting the reading experience. (Perhaps we are looking at the difference between art and performance, but I think that’s another blog!)
 
I am a storyteller, a performer, and a communicator, and that can’t be filled up with obtuse, often unintelligible words or sentences. If someone reads a long sentence and has to go back and read it again to understand the message, in my view the author has failed. I need no one to think I am erudite and intellectual. I want them to be moved by the story.
 
AI hasn’t learned it yet. It is clever, too clever, with every adjective and enthusiastic turn of phrase. And it’s repetitive. Everything I read from AI needs a good editor. When AI gets more astute and evolved, watch out. But I bet it will never move you like a human author can. An author who shares a story with the river of emotion running through her blood. That you can feel when you read her words. There’s nothing like that for me.


What do you think?

The Homeopathic treatment of Chronic Fatigue Syndrome/M.E

kindle dropper pic pixabay simple LARGEChronic Fatigue Syndrome:A guide to the homeopathic treatment of CFS/M.E. 

Eloquent Rascals Publishing,
Hillsborough County, NH.

I love that this book continues to help people. I get emails from people regularly about something they found in the book to help them. Warms my heart. CFS is such a horrible syndrome, and my heart aches for those who suffer. I did, myself, for eight long years, but a homeopathic remedy put an end to that!

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Creativity is its Own Reward!  Guest post for Linda’s Book Bag

lindas-book-bag-icon         Diane Solomon’s guest post for Linda’s Book Bag

 

Here’s an excerpt:

Being creative is often a calling. Are you compelled to create, be it art, music, poetry, fiction? Then you must do it. You must do it to fulfill your passion in life.  Without it you may feel dead, unfulfilled, trudging through the three-foot mudslog of life, day by day, without experiencing the joy of your own heart.

But, I hear you ask:“Will someone else like my artistic endeavor?” My answer: Who cares? Seriously. WHO CARES?

A few tips for artists and writers everywhere:

1) Dare to Suck (or Dare to Fail, for those of you appalled by the vulgarity.) As a singer/songwriter, I learned early (after an ego struggle) to trust the creative process and dive deeply into it. You have to dare to be criticized, dare to be silly, dare to be crazy, to be wild. You have to Dare to Suck.

READ The entire guest blog at Linda’s Book Bag

 

Check out our middle-grade fantasy/mystery entitled, The Ravenstone: The Secret of Ninham Mountain.
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About Diane Solomon
EloquentRascals.com 

 

Book Links for The Ravenstone

AMAZON:  Kindle or paperback
SMASHWORDS eBook
GOODREADS
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NETGALLEY

BARNES AND NOBLE Nook & Paperback

About the book: Imagine a raven appearing out of thin air and guiding you to an exquisitely carved icon that glows with ancient light and pulses with shamanic power.  This is how the adventure begins for Nadia and Aidan Shaw, 13-year-old twins, who live in idyllic Cold Spring, New York. Armed with the power of the Ravenstone and their own special gifts, they embark on a harrowing quest across centuries, at the bidding of a mysterious old shaman. They must depend on their courage, their faith in their friends, and luck… or is it destiny?

If they succeed, what they bring back could change the course of human existence.


REVIEW:

Many thanks to Dii Bylo, a Top 1% Goodreads Reviewer for her 5-Star review

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The Ravenstone

 

Fascinating book, “Soulful.”

I have just read the most fascinating book on Artificial Intelligence, entitled “Soulful” by David Espindola.

The ethics question around AI has been bothering me, but this author tackles the artificial intelligence concepts from all sides. A thought-provoking read!

Here is my review:

“Soulful: You in the Future of Artificial Intelligence”

“Soulful” is a comprehensive narrative, well written, well researched, and nicely referenced. I have read several books delving into AI recently, and was shocked at the lows to which some authors stooped, to show me how to fake customer reviews, rewrite others’ work from online, make a fortune from a “side hustle,” etc. The lack of ethics in this regard has bothered me deeply and I appreciate even more this thoughtful book by David Espindola. It is not just a history or discussion of AI, it is a dive into concepts of neuroscience, technology, philosophy, social psychology, the metaphysical, the spiritual, consciousness. Even theology.

Artificial Intelligence (humanity’s last invention?) has reached a tipping point, a profound shift in the landscape of human capabilities. Machines continue to encroach upon tasks once considered exclusively human territory. Must we make a dramatic shift? Must we find a way to harness the power of collaboration with AI?

In the book “Soulful,” these profound implications of AI advancement are examined, and the author gives us a comprehensive look at the challenges and opportunities that lie ahead. The author takes complex AI concepts and presents them in an accessible manner, showing how we can work with AI to drive productivity in such sectors as Education, Healthcare, Science, Manufacturing, and Service. “Soulful” also guides readers in identifying and nurturing unique human talents and skills that will be in high demand in the future job market.

But what I love about the book is the way the author delves into the essence of the human condition, exploring what sets us apart from machines. When we consider the concept of the human “soul,” we enter the arena that separates us from AI. Compassion, empathy, the vast flow of human creativity in art and music, tenderness, and emotions such as love. These are our gifts, not found in the areas of the machine.

And the discussion of consciousness… where does it begin, where does it end, what is it exactly? Am I just my brain? What about my spirit? The author dives into the possibility that consciousness is just a matter of perception, that what we think of as reality may indeed be a series of hallucinations. Oh my…. I will need to re-read this book, perhaps several times, and download some of the books the author references as well. These are concepts one thinks about from time to time, realizes he or she doesn’t have a clue, and just trundles off to make dinner.

I found it fascinating and enticing that the author believes with the advent of AI producing abundance and making our lives easier, humans “can dedicate more time and energy to the needs of the soul.” Would that it would work that way! Perhaps I am almost lost to cynicism, but in watching the behavior of humanity for 60 years, I fear humans will continue their shallow trek into materialism, hedonism, addictions, extreme highs and lows of thoughtless entertainments, and so forth.

This thought-provoking book takes us on a journey through the realms of AI and human potential, leaving readers with a deeper awareness of the changes underway, the choices and options they have, and the enduring uniqueness of the human spirit. A spirit that does inevitably reach for a higher purpose. And hopefully results in an optimistic vision of the future. The changes the author suggests seem a bit pie in the sky, but if a younger generation can hold this positive view, perhaps we can get there. I hope so.

A fascinating read.

A fascinating read.

The Prophet, by Kahlil Gibran, published 100 years ago this year.

100 years ago this year Kahlil Gibran’s The Prophet was published. A beloved manuscript of verses, it has sold millions of copies and been translated into countless languages.
 
I read my copy often. My favorites verses are:
 
On marriage:
 
“Give your hearts, but not into each
other’s keeping.
For only the hand of Life can contain
your hearts.
And stand together yet not too near
together:
For the pillars of the temple stand apart,
And the oak tree and the cypress grow
not in each other’s shadow.”
 
And on children.:
 
“Your children are not your children.
They are the sons and daughters of Life’s longing for itself.
They come through you but not from you,
And though they are with you yet they belong not to you.”
 
 
100 years. And as relevant and as beautiful today.

Carrie K’s Book Reviews gives “The Ravenstone” 5 stars!

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Many thanks to Carrie Kurtz of Carrie K’s Book Reviews for her wonderful review! So glad she loved it.


Book Reviews: REVIEW EXCERPT:

“There were honestly so many interesting things in this book!  It kept me wanting to read and I found myself trying to sneak in extra times to read a chapter or two.  As a matter of fact, I “went to bed” early so that I could finish it last night!

I will certainly be recommending this book!  Not just to children or middle graders, but to anyone who enjoys reading science fiction, fantasy, action, magical type genres.”  

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